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Stealing lines from Toothpaste for Dinner aside, I wrote a poem. Here it is. Can you guess what its about?
On Serenity
Take a star
A little burning
Bring it close
Let it warm you
Free your star
Let it travel
Back to heavens
Whence it came
Oh little star
Where did you go
When morning came
And daylight shone
Elusive star
You burning angel
Come shine again
For days are long
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Bad Poetry Oh noetry!
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Chyld 
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Posted 27 October 2006 - 10:02 AM
When you lose your calm, you feed your anger.
Less Is More v4
Now resigned to a readership of me, my cat and some fish
Less Is More v4
Now resigned to a readership of me, my cat and some fish
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Posted 28 October 2006 - 06:23 PM
Not bad, this is one that was on your laptop eariler isn't it?
Knowing you its either about getting laid, getting drunk, or getting stoned.
Knowing you its either about getting laid, getting drunk, or getting stoned.
This post has been edited by Dr Lecter: 28 October 2006 - 06:23 PM
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Posted 29 October 2006 - 11:24 PM
Video Store Haiku
I give them the tape
Sometimes they say
"is it any good?"
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It's impossible to guess what specifically your poem is about. I read it 15 times and can only guess it's about some one or thing that makes you happy. Pretty fucking weak break down but really I have no clue.
I give them the tape
Sometimes they say
"is it any good?"
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It's impossible to guess what specifically your poem is about. I read it 15 times and can only guess it's about some one or thing that makes you happy. Pretty fucking weak break down but really I have no clue.
This post has been edited by Jordan: 29 October 2006 - 11:27 PM
Oh SMEG. What the smeggity smegs has smeggins done? He smeggin killed me. - Lister of Smeg, space bum
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Chyld
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Posted 03 November 2006 - 10:51 AM
QUOTE (Dr Lecter @ Oct 28 2006, 11:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Not bad, this is one that was on your laptop eariler isn't it?
Knowing you its either about getting laid, getting drunk, or getting stoned.
Knowing you its either about getting laid, getting drunk, or getting stoned.
It was, and this guy knows my modus operendi too well.
When you lose your calm, you feed your anger.
Less Is More v4
Now resigned to a readership of me, my cat and some fish
Less Is More v4
Now resigned to a readership of me, my cat and some fish
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Posted 14 November 2006 - 05:53 PM
Haiku for Rabies
Foaming at the mouth
No form and no location
my diagnosis...
Oh, and:
Is anything worth fighting for?
We're born we breathe we die.
And as I walk down to the store,
Knowing well my body's lore
"The skin's the largest organ"
Resting on my kitchen floor.
Foaming at the mouth
No form and no location
my diagnosis...
Oh, and:
Is anything worth fighting for?
We're born we breathe we die.
And as I walk down to the store,
Knowing well my body's lore
"The skin's the largest organ"
Resting on my kitchen floor.
This post has been edited by Wayne: 14 November 2006 - 05:57 PM
And we want to be free to ride our machines without being hassled by the man! And we want to get loaded!
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Posted 28 November 2010 - 10:44 PM
Instead of clogging up the place with extra threads, I figured I'd just apply some of my knowledge of the Necromantic Arts.
A little diddy to the tune of "Hush little baby don't you cry"
Dance my little minions don’t you sigh,
Master’s gonna get you an alibi.
If that alibi won’t say a thing,
Master’s gonna try some bribery
If bribery doesn’t turn the law aside,
Master will provide a little cyanide.
If you’re afraid of death and can’t abide,
Master’s got some contacts on the inside.
If you think you can get out of there,
Master will begin a jail break affair.
Once you are out come back to me,
Master’s planning the crime of the century.
A little diddy to the tune of "Hush little baby don't you cry"
Dance my little minions don’t you sigh,
Master’s gonna get you an alibi.
If that alibi won’t say a thing,
Master’s gonna try some bribery
If bribery doesn’t turn the law aside,
Master will provide a little cyanide.
If you’re afraid of death and can’t abide,
Master’s got some contacts on the inside.
If you think you can get out of there,
Master will begin a jail break affair.
Once you are out come back to me,
Master’s planning the crime of the century.
Apparently writing about JM here is his secret weakness. Muwahaha!!!! Now I have leverage over him and am another step closer towards my goal of world domination.
"And the Evil that was vanquished shall rise anew. Wrapped in the guise of man shall he walk amongst the innocent and Terror shall consume they that dwell upon the Earth. The skies will rain fire. The seas shall become as blood. The righteous shall fall before the wicked! And all creation shall tremble before the burning standards of Hell!" - Mephisto
Kurgan X showed me this web comic done with Legos. It pokes fun at all six Star Wars films and I found it to be extremely entertaining.
<a href="http://www.irregularwebcomic.net/cast/starwars.html" target="_blank">http://www.irregularwebcomic.net/cast/starwars.html</a>
"And the Evil that was vanquished shall rise anew. Wrapped in the guise of man shall he walk amongst the innocent and Terror shall consume they that dwell upon the Earth. The skies will rain fire. The seas shall become as blood. The righteous shall fall before the wicked! And all creation shall tremble before the burning standards of Hell!" - Mephisto
Kurgan X showed me this web comic done with Legos. It pokes fun at all six Star Wars films and I found it to be extremely entertaining.
<a href="http://www.irregularwebcomic.net/cast/starwars.html" target="_blank">http://www.irregularwebcomic.net/cast/starwars.html</a>
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