Version two is done: I added some folds and included an eye hole, so it defiantely looks more mask like now. Hopefully there's aren't many more revisions, as the papers is starting to fray as a result of all the erasing (The lower part of his face on the left side of the image for instance)
@Casual: Thanks, for a while I didn't have his suit with the pinstripes, I thought they'd be too fiddly to do, but I did them in about 30 seconds (Which made me wonder why in the hell I thought it would be so hard to do them).
The hat was a bit of a bother, but mostly because I originally had it too tall (I was using my own Trilby hat for reference, which is taller for some reason. That or I have a short head, which is entirely plausible and now that I think of it, far more likely).
Also, you just made me realize I have no idea where said hat is...hmmm...how in the hell did I manage that? My dorm room is like, 9 by 8 feet...where the hell is my hat?...
Anyways, enjoy, and tell me what you think.