Posted 03 February 2008 - 05:47 PM
This is constructive criticism before you take any offence, ok? First off, you need to cut around Trilby better. I know it takes hours, but do it! I have... boy, pixel-by-pixel gets boring with high-res pictures... Anyway, it is worth it! Secondly, match Trilby up with the bottom of the image, a bit lower to make sure usually. Thirdly, I always thought Trilby would do his tie properly (being a gentleman) so that the "knot" was covered partially by collar on either side (how I do my ties...) and I also never imagined such a bright blue tie, but it's been a while since I played, and that's just personal opinion. Fourthly, his trilby doesn't seem quite right, it's a little rounded, and should stick out quite a bit more at the front. Let's just say the trilby needs work, look up some fedoras using image search and study them. Fifthly, his left arm seems rather thin, and looks like it may have been dislocated forwards a bit. Put the arm further back, and make it broader at the shoulder. And lastly, there is the proportions between head and body, but that could be down to the artistic style, which is fine. The only thing I would say however, is that he doesn't look entirely "British" (even if we are all French, Irish, German, Polish, etcetera) although he does remind me of a Gerry Anderson baddy... I can see the strings! Sorry... Other than that I suppose it looks fine. Well, I still hold a grudge against that tie... but that's not the point! Yeah, good work in the scheme of things. It's more of a "style picture" I suppose, but the trilby's all wrong...
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